July 19, 2012

HALF-BREED: CH. 10 - "DISCIPLINE"

WARNING: CONTAINS ADULT-CONTENT

Summary: Autumn learns what daily life with her Wraith Commander is going to be like.

The sun was shining and there was a gentle breeze flowing through the trees, flowers and plants. She was in the field at the forest's edge, behind the tented hut she and her mother called home on P3X-774, the Nox home world. Lorelei was sitting Indian-style, on her calves, plucking bright purple clusters of flowery buds from the plants and dropping them into the basket next to her. The scent of lavender wafted through the air. Autumn was up on a tree branch, picking apples and dropping them into a bucket on the ground below her.

Careful daughter,” her mother called out to her. “Don't fall and hurt yourself! And you shouldn't be throwing the apples from so high up. They will bruise!”


Yes, Mother,” Autumn replied, feeling annoyed at her over-protective mother. She was an adult now but her mom still treated her as if she were a child. She jumped down from the tree branch – being half-Wraith she had physical abilities that far surpassed those of a regular human. She could jump very high and jump back down with ease. She picked up the bucket that was half-filled with apples and walked over to where her mother was sitting.

It's peak season for the lavender,” her mother noted. “I will have plenty now to make my herbs and tonics.”

Yes, you promised to show me how to make essential oils from these plants and flowers,” Autumn replied. “Might you instruct me soon, Mother?”

Of course, darling Autumn. I will show you how to do this and then tomorrow we can pick some other herbs to make other concoctions. Tonight I will also teach you how to make apple butter.”

Suddenly, a giant flying machine, like the one Lorelei told her about that destroyed her village, flew overhead. They simultaneously looked up to the sky.

WRAITH!” Lorelei shouted, jumping up and grabbing Autumn's hand. “Run daughter!”

Autumn's heart was racing even faster than she was running as she trailed behind her mother. All around them, small fires started to burn, turning the meadow and forest into a flaming minefield. More DARTS appeared, sweeping the unprepared denizens into the culling beams. Lorelei had just narrowly missed one, as she turned around to make sure her daughter was still behind her.

Hurry! We don't have much time!” she yelled to Autumn.

As they reached the Stargate on the outskirts of the forest, Lorelei ran up to it and started punching in a random gate address.

Go, Daughter!”

I'm not leaving without you, Mother!” Autumn shouted as she reached the gate platform.

Lorelei finished punching in the last symbol then sprinted towards the platform. Autumn was standing on the top step anxiously awaiting her mother. Once Lorelei reached the top, she jumped into the iris. Autumn was right behind her. Then a culling beam appeared and Autumn was gone.

Mother!!!!” she screamed.

She opened her eyes and the Commander suddenly appeared above her. She was hyperventilating. He'd heard her screaming and opened the lid of the chamber. He pulled her up out of the box and carried her over to his bed, laying her down gently.

Autumn, just breathe...breathe...” he said, lightly shaking her. He waved his hand in front of her face and she could feel what seemed to be a cool breeze, blowing in her face. He'd stopped her hyperventilating with a wave of his hand. “You're OK, you are in my quarters.”

My mother...” she mumbled, then sat up and started crying. “I saw her. She felt so real, I even touched her....”

You were obviously having some kind of nightmare,” the Commander noted.

Autumn pulled her knees up to her chest and began rocking back and forth on the bed.

I miss my mother,” she said through tear-filled eyes. “I am all alone now. I have no one.”

The Commander put his arms around her.

You have me,” he said.

Right,” she replied sarcastically. “I have you. I have you to thank for her disappearance.”

Suddenly, he stood up and slapped her on the side of the head.

You must REALLY like pain, otherwise you wouldn't be talking back to me!” he exclaimed. “I tried to comfort you and instead you disrespect me!”

With that, he pulled her by the arm towards the room with the pipe.

Oh n-n-n-no! I'm sorry, Sir! I didn't mean it! Please don't hurt me again!”

It is too late for apologies, you ungrateful little hooligan!” he shouted back at her. “You are forcing me to discipline you again!”

Again, he bound her wrists, attached the binding to the pole and started beating on her once more, this time with a paddle. He did not put the blindfold and gag on her this time, however. This time he wanted her to SEE what pain looked like. She screamed and cried for him to stop, to let her down, promising to be good. But it was no use. Too late to say sorry, as he told her. And the paddle was more painful than the whip. Her skin began to turn black and blue all over, wherever the paddle came into contact with her flesh. Her vision became blurry as the tears flowed from her eyes.

If you continue to scream I will cut out your vocal chords!” he shouted at her.

Her heart began to pump faster and faster, the thought of not being able to speak at all ever again frightening her into being as quiet as possible, only hushed mewling now.

Ah, better,” he said. “You are beginning to learn now. Just cooperate with me and you will live to see another day.” After he finished beating her with the paddle, he took her down from the pipe and carried her back to his bed. “I think I like you better on your back, Half-Breed. But remember, the repercussions of screaming will be severe! Do you understand me?”

Autumn nodded and he smiled. She noticed that he was wearing a black robe and nothing underneath. She concluded that he'd probably just woken up and was still in the room when she started screaming from the deprivation chamber. She hoped he would not hurt her more harshly for this.

He climbed on top of her, held her arms down and looked into her eyes – his face almost touching hers. She thought he was going to say something but he said nothing and began to kiss her. His lips gently brushed across hers and she started to feel tingly. The tingling felt better than the paddle, even though she felt sore all over her body, and the pain of her skin coming into contact with his bed was hurting her, so she just closed her eyes and tried to focus her attention on the Commander and his mouth. He seemed surprised when she began to kiss him back, opening her mouth to allow his tongue to find hers.

There, I told you I could make you feel good...as long as YOU are good,” he said, grinning. “Do you feel good now?” Autumn nodded. The seduction was at least better than the alternative. “Then I will keep going.”

He put his lips to hers again and she could feel his tongue inside her mouth, so she relaxed and gave hers to him which seemed to intensify his passion. His kissing became more aggressive and she just followed his movements, trying to keep up with him. From her lips, he traced a line with his tongue down to her chin, his goatee tickling her a little, nudging her chin up with his, exposing her neck. He alternated between biting, sucking and licking – each bite causing her to wince, but the pain felt like pleasure compared to the beatings he was giving to her. She let her head fall back and he moved his hands all over her body, exploring her flesh and getting more and more turned on. Before she knew it, his head was between her legs, licking and sucking her flesh there. No one had ever done that to her before and it was the first time the Commander had done it, but it felt incredible...almost rhapsodic.

With each pass of his tongue, her pleasure mounted and she became wetter and wetter and found herself having an orgasm despite the hatred she had for the Commander. The pleasure was definitely better than the pain though, so she did not try to fight him. He looked up at her from between her legs.

I see you are finally choosing pleasure over pain, human.”

She nodded and smiled, trying to stay silent because she liked having vocal chords. He stood up and looked down at her – she nearly gasped when she noticed that he had a huge erection, and had a feeling about what he would do next. He instructed her to stay on the bed but to sit up and face him. She did as he asked and he took her head and guided it to his exposed wraith-hood.

Now Autumn, you will please ME,” he stated. “Do not use your teeth or there will be consequences!”

She nodded and with some trepidation, began to take him into her mouth. Slowly, she sucked, trying to use her tongue as a barrier between his flesh and her teeth, terrified of what he might do if she did not do as told. She could only fit about half of it into her mouth, however – when she tried to go further, it made her start choking.

Don't try to take it in all at once, young one,” he said. “It will take lots of practice before you can do that and believe me, you will have plenty of time to learn. Your mouth still feels good though. I am ready for you now.”

He pushed her down on the bed again and mounted her. She closed her eyes and tried to just shut everything else out – concentrating only on pleasure – forcing herself to like it. After a while, she realized that she wasn't really forcing it – she was becoming aroused. She was putty in his hands now. So when he finally emptied himself inside her, the burning pain was absent.

I told you it doesn't hurt if you want it,” he said, grinning at her as he stood up. “I am pleased that you are cooperating now. For that, I will allow you extra time out of the deprivation chamber today.” He pulled her up so that she was standing in front of him, and looked down at her body. “The bruising is beginning to fade. You seem to be healing faster with each day. There may be hope for the Wraith in you yet.”

Disclaimer:  The Wraith & Stargate Atlantis are owned by MGM.  Autumn Noxx and Lorelei are original characters that belong to me.

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