July 19, 2012

HALF-BREED: CH. 5 - "PUNISHMENT"

WARNING: CONTAINS ADULT-CONTENT

Summary: The Commander (Jimmy) shows Autumn a whole new world of pain.

When there were no more bananas to feed her, the Commander stood up and looked down at Autumn. She was just looking straight ahead, as if in a trance.

Autumn!” he said loudly. “Look at me!”

She slowly raised her head and looked up at him, squinting because her eyes were still dry from all the crying. She could sense the change of tone in his voice and whatever he was going to say next, was not going to be good. He just stood there for a few moments, staring down at her, like a bug under a microscope. Then he ordered her to stand up. As she stood up, he then issued another directive.

Please turn around, with your back to me, facing the wall.”


He motioned to the wall behind the couch and she nervously turned around, fear gripping her like a hangman's noose. She knew something really horrible was about to happen so she closed her eyes and waited for whatever sadistic punishment she was about to receive. Suddenly, his hands were on her – his right hand on her shoulder and his left hand tugging at her hair, smelling it. Why was he so obsessed with her hair?

Because it smells delightful,” he answered out loud. “But your behavior the other day...not so delightful. It's time for you to learn what happens when you do not follow my orders!”

Now her heart was pounding. He ceased tugging on her hair and moved his hands past her shoulders and down towards her chest. He slowly pulled her white robe open and let it drop to the floor. She felt chilly and exposed – exactly how he wanted her to feel. He reached around with both hands and clamped his hands down over her breasts and squeezed them so tightly, it felt like she'd just been hit by a wrecking ball. She wanted to scream but it felt like all the air had just gone out of her lungs and all she could manage was a loud gasp as the tears fell out of her eyes and down her face. Then he pushed her forward and over and bent her at the waist. It became real obvious real fast what was going to happen next.

He'd already pulled his pants down and before she could even blink, he was on her, violently forcing himself into her from behind. That first thrust almost knocked her over and she reached out to put her hands on the couch, expecting to fall, but he was holding her by the hips with both hands and his grip was strong enough to keep her from nose-diving right into the couch. His prong was enormous and rock hard. But it was nothing like Erik's. It was cold...so very very cold. It felt like she was getting fucked with a gigantic icicle. She finally found her voice, not that it was going to do her much good now.

Oh God, please!!!!” she screeched. “Please stop!!! Leave me alone!!! Don't do this!!! Nooooooo!!!!”

You should've thought about that before you disobeyed me, Human!” he responded. “You don't even deserve to have a name! On this ship you are NO ONE!” The more she screamed, the harder and faster he violated her. He laughed at her. “That's right, scream for me! No one else is going to hear you!”

And with that, he gave one final push and exploded inside her as she led out a blood-curdling howl. It felt like her whole pelvic region was on fire except she knew what a burn felt like and this was at least a thousand times worse. His ejaculation fluid felt like battery acid eating away at the lining of her interior lady parts. She'd never felt pain this excruciating before.

Oh God, please just kill me already!!!! KILL ME!!!!!” she screeched at him. A few moments later she went limp. The Commander felt her falling away from him and quickly pulled her back up then pushed her onto the couch. She was still breathing, but unconscious. She'd passed out from the pain. He summoned the drone guard who was standing outside the door.

Stick her in a rejuvenation pod. I'll check on her later.”

The drone nodded then carried Autumn out of the room, to another part of the ship. The Commander then marched down to the science lab. He'd spent the last three days trying to figure out what to do about the Scientist and at last, had come to a decision.

Commander,” the Scientist greeted him. “I have analyzed all the test data I ran on Autumn and have a final report for you.”

I see,” the Commander replied. “What did you find out?”

Well it took quite a bit of detective work once I had the results. I had to match them up to a database that contains thousands of records of all the Wraith here in the Pegasus Galaxy and then verify the identity of the one match it found.”

Do not bore me with the grotty little details,” the Commander growled. “I just want a name.”

He's a Commander who once served under our new Queen. He is called “Blaze” by most. The humans called him “Todd.”

And where is he now?”

We do not know,” explained the Scientist. “The Queen said he was captured by some primitive humans many years ago and is still presumed missing.”

Hmmm, interesting. And that is all?”

Yes, it's all there in the report.”

Excellent work. Thank you,” the Commander declared. “Now that your work for me is done here, I want you off my ship.”

You can't be serious,” the Scientist replied. “The human is hardly worth all this trouble.”

Yes,” the Commander responded. “And yet a few days ago you were defending her...and yourself.”

Well, if I'd known you were going to react that way, I wouldn't have bothered.”

The Commander stepped forward and moved in closer, his face merely a yoctometer from Erik's.

Save your pathetic attempt at an apology, clever-man. You're being relocated to another hive...today. Pack up your things and get out. The girl stays here.”

Very well then,” the Scientist huffed. “Now she can be your problem child.”

The Commander glared at him then raised his hand and smacked him so hard on the side of the head that Erik went flying sideways and landed hard on the other side of the room.

No, YOU are the problem child, clever-man. Never show your visage here again!”

And with that, he spun around and marched right back out of the room with the report in his hand. Erik's wounds healed quickly and he stood up and began to put his stuff into boxes, all the while sending a telepathic message to Autumn:

I am sorry Autumn. I am being asked to leave the ship. Obey the Commander please, and perhaps we may see each other again one day without all the unpleasant circumstances.”

Disclaimer:  The Wraith & Stargate Atlantis are owned by MGM.  Autumn Noxx is an original character.


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